She Wasn’t His Pick

The roses weren’t just flowers, they were invitations. 
If you didn’t get one, you didn’t belong. 
And at Brian Vale’s parties, belonging meant everything. 
Until one girl dared to ask, “Where’s mine?” 
And dared even harder not to beg for it. 

Brian Vale lived for the show. Heir to one of L.A.’s most influential real estate empires, his name opened doors, and closed hearts. To him, love was a game, and women were players. His infamous pool parties weren’t about champagne or sun, they were tests. Roses were handed out like golden tickets. If you didn’t get one, you didn’t even make it past the velvet rope. 

Tonight, the game continued. Hundreds gathered, dressed in designer fits and filtered smiles. The DJ was spinning, the champagne was endless, and Brian stood at the center of it all, surrounded by women who knew what was at stake. 

But then he saw her. 

She wasn’t in heels. She wasn’t wearing a designer label. She was sitting in a wheelchair, her chin raised like a queen, her eyes sharp as cut glass. 

“Hey, rich man,” she called out, loud enough to cut through the music. “Don’t I deserve a rose too?” 

Silence. 

Brian turned. His friends chuckled. She wasn’t “his type.” Not glamorous enough. Not bait for his shallow affections. But something about her, the audacity, the confidence, slapped the smirk off his face. 

He hesitated. Then handed her a rose. 

Not out of pity. But because, for the first time, someone hadn’t waited to be chosen. She demanded it. 

Her name was Maya. 

Brian wasn’t prepared for Maya. She didn’t flirt for favors or cling to his arm like the others. She didn’t play nice, didn’t play dumb. And still, he found himself seeking her out more than anyone. 

But the game needed stakes. So Brian changed the rules. 

Only two roses this time. One ring. 

The girls whispered, plotted. This wasn’t a party anymore, it was war. Dresses became armor. Compliments, weapons. 

Maya didn’t care. She sat at the bar, sipping soda, talking to the bartender about astronomy. Brian watched her, torn. 

The favorite, the kind of girl who won every year, was a model named Brooklyn. Tall. Blonde. Polished. She had charm down to a science. 

She whispered in his ear, “I’ll make it worth your while, Brian.” 
He smiled. But the words felt empty. 

Then, sabotage. 

Brooklyn snuck into Maya’s guest room, loosened the mattress bolts, poured water on her seat cushion. By morning, Maya was bruised, furious, and humiliated. 

Brian saw her roll out early, jaw tight, hair unbrushed, pride shaken. He didn’t stop her. He didn’t know how to. 

At the final dinner, Brooklyn took Brian’s hand. 

“There’s no need for a rose,” she said. “Just give me the ring.” 

Brian laughed, tight. “You sure you deserve it?” 

“I eliminated everyone else,” she purred. “Especially that little girl in the chair.” 

Brian froze. 

That was the moment. Not the dress. Not the ring. The cruelty. 

“You didn’t win,” he said. 

She frowned. “Excuse me?” 

“You cheated. You mocked someone who never even wanted the game.” He stood. “Get out. Before I have security do it.” 

She hissed curses as she left. The party ended in stunned silence. 

Brian stayed behind, alone. Thinking. 

The next day, Brian found Maya sitting by the beach, her book in her lap, her feet buried in the sand. 

“I’m not here to give you a rose,” he said. 

“Good,” she replied. “I don’t want it.” 

He smiled, nervous. “Because I’m here to lay all of them at your feet.” 

She blinked. “Why? What changed?” 

“I watched people fight for me, lie for me, sabotage for me. And then I watched someone quietly leave without saying a word.” 

Maya looked at him for a long time. 

“I didn’t leave because I was scared,” she said. “I left because I knew my worth. I wasn’t going to beg for it.” 

Brian knelt down, not with a rose, but with a folded note. 

Inside was a sketch. Of her. Laughing. 

“I drew this after our first conversation. I didn’t realize until now… this is what love looks like. 

They didn’t kiss. Not yet. 
Maya smiled. “You’re not the man I met at that party.” 

“I’m trying not to be.” 

“Then maybe,” she said, “I’ll give you one rose.” 

He laughed. “One?” 

“For now.” 

She tucked a flower from her bag into his pocket. “You’ll earn the rest.” 

And they sat in the sand, sun warming their skin, no games, no ring—just two people starting over. Not because someone won. But because someone changed. 

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